I think someone likes assasins creed.
Looks good though ... kinda reminds me of one I made recently. We had the same idea for the effects.
The only thing I would do is put some effects infront of the guy (more pronounced) and maybe erase pieces of the render that the effects are going over ... that would help with more depth.
I like the effect C4Ds though ... do you do them yourself?
Welcome back! Just wait ... things should be improving durastically soon.
Check out my new C4D pack in the premium section while you are here.
Happy Posting,
Duke.