Probably worse than my first...but learning - GFXRebels

*Sabbat* · 07-21-2007, 12:11 AM

I tried to do something very different with this one compared to my first, based loosely off of a tutorial but since the tut assumed more photoshop knowledge than I have, I had to wing it 1/3 of the way through. Help and criticism always welcome

evo Force · 07-21-2007, 12:18 AM

This one is better then your firs! It has a clean feel to it and the bg is decent.

For your text i'd say: use a different colour, that's more atrractive. To make it even better you can add small details to your text, such as small text.( you can download brushes of small text or do it yourself)

Edit: here's another example of great small text usage. Tag made by NonFiction

*plmarsg8* · 07-21-2007, 12:26 AM

I don't like the effects that are on her face. It is really distracting.

*Sabbat* · 07-21-2007, 12:58 AM

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Originally Posted by plmarsg8

I don't like the effects that are on her face. It is really distracting.

Yes...they are but I am still not sure how to clean that up just yet. I'll keep that in mind ofr my next piece.

Flip · 07-21-2007, 01:02 AM

Nice job, I would totally say this is way better than your first one ^^

I only have a few things that could make it better

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I don't really like that I have about it is that the c4d *I think is a c4d. The pinkish/purpleish color on her face* is covering her face.

Also the border could do with some work but I think that it kind of suits the tag but I would still change it

the text could totally use some work. I don't really like the text saying *Sabbat*. Its to monotone. Sometimes it looks better without text. In this case I think it would look better without. Although I like the text on the side of her hair.

All in all, great second tag. So keep trying you'll get better.

*Sabbat* · 07-21-2007, 01:42 AM

Thanks a lot for both the tips and critique! Yes its a c4d thats making the distracting coloration across her face. I should have maybe resized the one I used. And again good point on the Sabbat being in a bad place...I think I should have made it vertically down the right side. I wasn't going to put anymore text on it after making the text for her name, but I figured I needed the practice.

*plmarsg8* · 07-21-2007, 10:46 AM

Just erase parts of the c4d on her face.

*AceBomber* · 07-21-2007, 04:16 PM

its very good for beginneer i think r u? im not sure

*Sabbat* · 07-21-2007, 10:40 PM

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Originally Posted by AceBomber

its very good for beginneer i think r u? im not sure

Yes I am a beginner, that is my second attempt. Thanks for the kind words.