Holy- Portfolio

[HolySLayeR]

ights, well heres my portfolio. well at least the start of it
Gara sig - 3rd GIMP with 3 variants


c&c

and tell me what one looks better please XD

[HolySLayeR]

ights, heres a new one i made, and -bump i guess-

Edit, and this is with a lil darker Back Ground

and yah, c&c and tell me what one you think looks better

And heres is another one

and yes, C&C on all of them plz.

and my final one for the day, please c&c all them T_T

[*shin Retro Qix <3.]

Let me start.

Gaara:

The render is way too small. Your getting monotone here. Which is bad. Experiment more with colors. The effects are boring so as the composition of the tag. The only way to make it better is start a new tag(sig) with lots of nice concept. Just stick one what concept your going to use. Like grunge, if your going to make a grunge sig, make sure that your going to stick with that idea. Don't mix grunge with abstract or vector, for it will look damn ugly. Well, get Photoshop first. I strongly recommend it for making tags. I think there is only a few good GIMP users. But they ain't pro.

Robot, Cyborg:

To start it out. Nice blending and nice colors. The thing that matters is that the left is way too bright and it will break the sig. You know the popular saying? "The text makes it or breaks it..". It goes with the composition too. That's way too bright. Some bright sigs looks good but not with this one. Try using grunge style in this one. It looks better. Make the light source a little focused too. I'll teach you when you get Photoshop.

3rd tag:

It looks way unrelated. It's more on a copy and paste of the render. You have to make the render stick with the BG. Add more effects around it.

Last tag:

This looks way better. Nice light source. And nice BG. Better with the other tags. I prefer you start making tags the way this was made. Show us some more of this.

Thanks for your tags. I appreciated CNCing it.

[HolySLayeR]

Simple 5 min banner i made for my friends web page... his old one was all grey and dull and boring...

[*shin Retro Qix <3.]

Dude, you should try to spend more time bro. It looks very empty. What's the site about?

[HolySLayeR]

its just for this one game hes gona be doing, its a rpg called torn

[*shin Retro Qix <3.]

Oh. You lacks most of the effects bro.

[-G17-]

sharpen the face and blur the other parts of the background
that should be more than enough
otherwise add some orange/red lines to left side (behind the text)
or just add some more lightning to the right side

but dont make it to complex or you'll kill the ones visiting the side :w00t1:

[HolySLayeR]

yah thats the hard thing about 2dISH games... the effects cant be to extravagint... (or how ever you spell that word) and thats why it looks kinda boring and no effects.

[*shin Retro Qix <3.]

Well, you can take every render/stock to its limit if you know what you're doing. For example, sprites, they are just plain. But if you know what to do, it can be a PRO tag. It's a matter of visualization.