| What u said, flow is nice.
At the right side, the effects are mostly overcontrasted! (Then i'm not talking about the "wireframes" totally at the right, they are nice!)
Color using could be done better.
Right & Left side, are 2 different for me, doesn't seem really nice.
Try 2 add more depth, cuz the left side really lacks it.
Render seems a bit oversharpened at some places, and blend the render better, also for increase ur depth.
Maybe u can make some parts a bit darker (Black) the depth will be increased, but also the Focal point, cuz now i can't really see where the attention has to be.
Overall seems pretty ok, lightning is ok 2.
just a sig where u can improve a few things, and i think u can do that.
Imo, it should be almost a 7/10 | 
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