Attack.

[evo Force]

It's a too busy for me. The bg and the effects are also pretty random . On the left side the bg is mostly white and on the right it's suddenly brownish ( wich looks like a house by a street to me?)

I also don't think the whireframe is not a good idea. Ken's fist is the part of the stock that get's most of the attention. Cuz that's where most of the engery is,so his fist is a great focal point. To me it looks like you focal point is his elbow...
And by adding the whireframe you now have two places you want the viewer to concentrate on....upper and lower arm. wich is not good imo. On Wich arm should we concentrate?

But still...not bad since this is the first time u used a whireframe....

[(V)itamin [W]ar]

Originally Posted by evo Force

It's a too busy for me. The bg and the effects are also pretty random . On the left side the bg is mostly white and on the right it's suddenly brownish ( wich looks like a house by a street to me?)

I also don't think the whireframe is not a good idea. Ken's fist is the part of the stock that get's most of the attention. Cuz that's where most of the engery is,so his fist is a great focal point. To me it looks like you focal point is his elbow...
And by adding the whireframe you now have two places you want the viewer to concentrate on....upper and lower arm. wich is not good imo. On Wich arm should we concentrate?

But still...not bad since this is the first time u used a whireframe....

The focal is the middle part of the sig the face and a tad of the arm, as the arms infront of the face, the hand however isnt the focal point, the day someone punches so fast they make a flame trail and you get a clear precise picture let me know haha

[huMAC]

"Looks nice vit. Great work. I am working on wireframes too. hehe..