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(V)itamin [W]ar · 04-08-2007, 05:02 PM

I like the placement of the render and the effects used.
However:

-Draw more attension to the focal point, i.e bluring the rest slightly and/or sharpening the focal point.
-I dont like the text that much, maybe use something more suttle or blend it in with an overlay; Maybe give it a gradient of fade some of it away?
-Work on the lighting, maybe either focus on the aura from the sword? or the actual room lighting thats displayed on the renders body? Presonally id radiate the light from the sword.

Overall great job though i like it

04-08-2007, 05:02 PM	#10 (permalink)
(V)itamin [W]ar Persnikity Perfectionist Sig Rating: Intermediate Digital Art Rating: Not Rated Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Brockton Gender: Male Posts: 494 Rebel Points: 667RP Reputation: 9 Member #162	I like the placement of the render and the effects used. However: -Draw more attension to the focal point, i.e bluring the rest slightly and/or sharpening the focal point. -I dont like the text that much, maybe use something more suttle or blend it in with an overlay; Maybe give it a gradient of fade some of it away? -Work on the lighting, maybe either focus on the aura from the sword? or the actual room lighting thats displayed on the renders body? Presonally id radiate the light from the sword. Overall great job though i like it __________________ The world of gfx is full of people telling you no, your not good enough, telling you three things and kicking you in the ass and moving on, thats personally my opinion. My original dream with this team was too make a place were not only do we strive to be the best and win at all costs, but we don't leave others in the dust, We as a team should recruit not only to succeed but to assist the community as best we can. Think about that when you recruit....